The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in japan and malaysia in this year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs underneath, indicate the comparation of Average household expenditures by Major Category in Japan and Malaysia. The miscellaneous of expense like housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and services.
The top category is housing has a percentage of 21% in japan, meanwhile Malaysia has the strenght of 34% with difference for 13%. In Japan, transportation has the highest percentage of 29% than Malaysia which was 26% with little deviation for 3%. At the same time food category has considerable percentage of 24% in Japan and 27% in Malaysia the greater one, it has similar quarrel with transportation denomination. The health care of these countries has the smallest grade of 6% in japan and 3% in Malaysia, which has the difference of 3%. Lastly, category there other goods and services, Japan has the value of 20% and 10% in Malaysia, the difference is also quite large, which is 10%.
The inference of household expenditures in japan and Malaysia for average has the confronment and can be conclude that; the highest of the outlay of household in Japan is transportation and Malaysia has the housing. Hereinafter, there food category with high percentage from both of these country. Housing category are third place in japan, whereas malaysia accopied for transportation. Next, other goods and services has ranked fourth in japan, so is Malaysia. At last, there health care, both of them has same category with the lowest allocation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: has the highest
...rence for 13%. In japan, transportation has highest percentage of 29% than malaysia which w...
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Suggestion: .
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the smallest'.
Suggestion: has the smallest
...ion. The health care of these countries has smallest grade of 6% in japan and 3% in malaysia...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Housing
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
...th care, both of them has same category with lowest allocation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21186440678 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04325022486 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483050847458 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1716699777 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164970754913 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764069943923 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654714643636 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116177137399 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427661432006 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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