You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for threemonths over the summer.Write a letter to the Manager. In your lettersay what experience you haveask what the work involvesinquire about conditionsYou should write at least 150 words.All

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You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for threemonths over the summer.
Write a letter to the Manager.
In your letter

say what experience you have
ask what the work involves
inquire about conditions
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.
you do NOT need to write your own address.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inquire about the part-time position as a waiter advertised in 'The Evening Echo' on 24th June.

I am looking for work in the months of July and August because my university vacation is then. I have quite a lot of experience in the hotel business, as I was working in a guesthouse last year. The job involved dealing with guests, and I very much enjoyed it. I can supply references of my previous employer if you require them.

Could you please let me know what this position involves? At the guesthouse, I worked as a porter and also I did some work as a waiter in ...

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 7.392 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.696 0.50
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