Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
some people prefer to do the same think all their life, but other people prefer to spent their life travel, learning, studying and changing jobs if they feel that need it. this kind of think become more controversial in the last few years, because social media show us how the rest of people doing with their life and actually people to around 20's and 30's just want to life without spent all their life to doing the same. In my opinion, do the same for many years could be dangerous, stressful and insane. In this essay I will show how these kind of thoughts are changing.
we are in a world where everything happens so fast, and my generation wants to life with intense, we don't think to much in the future and we don't think in find a job or to spend our life in the same company. One important reason for why we are thinking like that, is because we saw our parents to spend their life and dreams in the same place, in the same company, with the same friends, and when they feel old just let they know how we need to work hard to achieved our dreams. For example, my mother worked in the same company for 30 years and she never travel outside her country, she never finished her college and she never did what she wants it, why? because she felt afraid to do it.
On the other hand, if people like my that want everything, like a good job, but permission to travel when I want it, or just to take holidays if I need it, could be risk if we don't think about the consequences. In my opinion we traied to avoid some responsabilities and we don't want to grow up so quickly like our parents. For instance, my parents got married when they were 20 years old, and I am 35 and I don't want to have children yet.
In conclusion if some people prefer to do the same things in this moment is because they feel afraid to change, but the world change constantly, so we need to change with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 20.9802955665 267% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 362.0 242.827586207 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2320441989 5.00649968141 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18939339169 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46408839779 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.931034482759 752% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9536233512 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203799676746 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863772567357 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787870454569 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150608779818 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078828705544 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 53.1260098522 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 11.5310837438 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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