Some people say that E- book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that modern technology will change anything through anyone have using electronic material in whole life.The root can that sometimes offspring do read on E-book.There is strong opinion ritual newspaper and magazines should not replace in the worldwide.I am not agree with this assertion.There are manifold
reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue that multiheads.There most predominant some dweller consider that modern world of the modern technology have changed local newspapers and funny magazines in our nationdsTherefore,today youngster especially use online website.For instance,YouTube,Twitter,Snapchat, Instagram and so on.After that,it is unquestionably true that in few days education plays a vital role in human being life as well as some person do job in their life that 's why they must study online sites.Hences,they most read E-book that's that youth almost should using technology gadgets like cell phone, laptop,tablet,
computer and extra.
Moving on the newspaper all in all magazines.There is no denying that fact the,some people think that a couple of years newspaper always give a lot of information to every one.Otherwise,
newspaper and magazines always give fresh news relate to all issues.For examples, industry line,law, government,political,officer.Last but not
the least,according to me,newspaper is the best source to upsurge knowledge day by day.
All saisaand down,I reckon on one hand it is no doubt newspaper is worldwide than magazines usually give fresh news.From the other side,technology is basic part of life as far as most of juvenile can read articles for E read book.Thus,they will help for study than adolescent often use technology devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64705882353 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0976404722 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.373335984 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.0 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 20.7667163134 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22683461845 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133171164831 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371050082189 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940936952479 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591132602119 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.2 13.0946893788 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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