Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. what are the reasons for this? how can this problem be overcome?
Working-class these days is finding very hard to maintain a balance between their private life and their work. This is can be due to various factors like late working hours or an unstable job. One should opt for a stable job rather than to go for a fat salaried job, to live a peaceful life.
In recent years salary packs for different jobs are witnessing a steep increase but these high paid jobs have their disadvantages. To begin with, these jobs require long working hours and a person is unable to spare time for its own family. Moreover, some shift jobs disturb the personal lives of people because some times when both husband and wife are on jobs, they feel isolated from each other due to the difference in time of jobs. Last but not least, some jobs are not stable and require frequent transfers, by which a person is unable to provide a good education to his/her children. It is also one reason for people's disturbed lives.
To maintain a good working life as well as a personal life, every person should find a work which does not disturb his daily life. For instance, find a job with which one can easily manage time for family. Joint families are also need of time as if one family member has a busy job, others can cover that by doing his daily chores. For example, if one member of a family is in the army, the other members can play a vital role in caring for his wife and children.
In conclusion, families are an important part of life and one should not let his job to disturb his daily life. Modern working class should consider twice before joining a job, that his personal life should not be impacted.
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- Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings Do you think it is a good thing 78
- Most societies has its homeless people Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money To what extent do you agree 78
- Doctors, nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...to live a peaceful life. In recent years salary packs for different jobs are wit...
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Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...ime for family. Joint families are also need of time as if one family member has a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53691275168 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24021376717 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9050294264 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218458320398 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911483924219 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705347661509 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141346558502 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792286955228 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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