Your landlord wants to increase the rent. write a letter to tell him
why do you think the rent should not be increased?
what will you do if it increased?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in response to your notice number 1670OP5 dated July 18, 2019 with respect to increase in rent of the flat. We are tenants of one of your residential colonies – Bahria Town- in Rawalpindi Pakistan.
In recent correspondence, you have intimated us about the rise of the rent of the vicinity. Firstly, I believe it is completely unreasonable as you have already increased our rent last year by 12 %. Secondly, It is the government’s policy that the rent of residential area can only be increased by 8% Per annum after consulting with the tenant. On the other hand, we have asked around and came to know that the average rent of a flat like this one is 5000 rupees per month with advance amenities like fridge, private garage and laundry area.
Therefore, if you increased the rent, I would be forced to vacate the resident and find more a suitable abode for us. Additionally, I would want you to refund my security fee of amount 50,000 rupees in cash as per our agreement. However, I have a right to report breach of the law to local councils as everyone should respect and follow the laws and regulations formed by the government.
Yours faithfully,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-18 | Saira Faiz | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more suitable'?
Suggestion: a more suitable
... forced to vacate the resident and find more a suitable abode for us. Additionally, I would wan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75480769231 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82097082974 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8415750166 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 4.34317383033 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293162591589 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111224855363 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726632733047 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185258736247 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211320256004 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.