Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others, this is an expensive waste of time.
It has been a trend that travelling to unknown countries as a break before looking forward to job opportunities or higher education helps a person be more focused towards his/her goals.but not everybody has the same opinion as some might contradict this thought as a waste of time and money. This essay will further enlighten the readers with both the views.
Travelling has shown its benefits in people's life in plethora. some which could be such as meeting new people might open new pathways with respect to a person's curriculum. Moreover, different cultures, lifestyles, as well as food habits inspire some people to adopt them in their day-to-day life. For example it has been seen that many foreigners visiting India will surely take YOGA as a part of their daily routine which shall offer them health and concentration. Many a times it is been observed that travelling induces creativity and focus in a humans life. For instance, a recent survey in the United States about university admissions has said that people seeking admissions after a gap secure higher ranked institutions in comparison to those who do not take a gap. Further, a report on working professionals has shown that people who take short or long trips during a year show more efficiency in work in comparison to those who didn't.
However, it might not be the case always. Some people believe that taking a break from studies could distract them from their goals instead they could just finish their studies get highly paid jobs and then probably save some money and then travel to for relaxation. Moreover, certain countries do not support this kind of thoughts of taking a break from studies for a year or so. In countries like India, China etc. parents cannot bear such costs, rather children have to start contributing towards family income as soon as they finish their studies.
In order to conclude, we could say that different people have different opinions about travelling. some might consider it beneficial before kick starting a new career and some might find it better to travel post achieving their goals as a part of relaxation.
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- Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others, this is an expensive waste of time. 84
- Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others, this is an expensive waste of time. 78
- Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment).Do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to jobbing'.
Suggestion: to jobbing
...tries as a break before looking forward to job opportunities or higher education helps...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...s benefits in peoples life in plethora. some which could be such as meeting new peop...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ght open new pathways with respect to a persons curriculum. Moreover, different culture...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...fer them health and concentration. Many a times it is been observed that travelling ind...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...lling induces creativity and focus in a humans life. For instance, a recent survey in ...
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Line 3, column 938, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ency in work in comparison to those who didnt. However, it might not be the case a...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...t. However, it might not be the case always. Some people believe that taking a brea...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...so. In countries like India, China etc. parents cannot bear such costs, rather children...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ve different opinions about travelling. some might consider it beneficial before kic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96078431373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57862573955 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560224089636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8977862305 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236857619021 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630265070158 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389682696575 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132328880913 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204167255315 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.