Some people believe that schools should only teach subjects which are beneficial to childrens future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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...y studies academic subjects like history , science , economics etcetera .It helps ...
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...cts to make goals . On the other hand , subjects like art and music helps stude...
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...c helps students to broaden their skills . Sports are significant for the physical...
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...s music are important for the relaxation .childrens are very creative . They learn...
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... the overall development of the children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32558139535 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76914486174 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.4904620496 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 1.69756097561 2239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229377788145 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09910879063 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510712713494 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159852269673 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324530337707 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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