The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the mean precipitation of a month in Hong Kong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London for a year.
Overall, Hong Kong has the maximum rainfall where Cairo has the least. Most of the cities have the highest rainfall in the middle of the year.
According to the table, for the first six months, rainfall is in increasing order for Hong Kong, Tokyo, and Jakarta but Cairo and London have reverse order. The Jakarta has 300mm of rainfall in January which is followed by London with 80mm, Tokyo with 48mm, Hong Kong contains 24mm and the least precipitation in Cairo of 7mm. For the next following months, the rainfall in Hong Kong and Tokyo rises gradually but the other three cities have a decline.
Again for the second half, In August the rainfall grow up by 354mm than January in Hong Kong, which is the highest throughout the period, and slumping down for rest months in Hong Kong and Tokyo. In contrast, in Jakarta and London rain amount is constantly growing till the end of the year but Cairo has no rainfall from September to December. By the end, Jakarta has the highest rainfall of 210mm where other cities have under 80mm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68965517241 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23418430514 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467980295567 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7372735094 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161482355295 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935913395663 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370664112414 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132639826807 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280399689553 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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