Your friend asked you to help him find a music teacher for his child. write a letter to your friend to tell him you have found a suitable teacher.
explain why you think they are suitable
Advise your friend how to get in touch with the teacher
Dear Anna,
I have a wonderful news for you. As you asked me to search for a musician to teach your child. It is unbelievable, but I have found a top of the notch music teacher for your daughter.
He is a true professional and has skills to play guitar, Violin, drums, trumpet, Saxophone, but have exceptional talent to play Piano. He is topper from Lahore Arts College and has been teaching children for 10 years. Additionally, I have also checked with a couple of his previous pupils and they have recommended him highly and have only praise for his instructing methods. Recently, I went in one of his class to listen to him first hand and the way he plays is mind blowing, the rhythm, the music. It is simply mesmerizing. The good thing is, he charges a nominal amount to teach children and bringing his own instruments and besides gives free musical notes.
I believe, you should meet him personally, as this gives the real gist of someone’s personality, manners, thoughts and way-forward about teaching. Therefore, I have given him your mobile number and address. I hope you don’t mind.
Best wishes,
SAIRA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'wonderful news'.
Suggestion: wonderful news
Dear Anna, I have a wonderful news for you. As you asked me to search for ...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'praised'.
Suggestion: praised
...ve recommended him highly and have only praise for his instructing methods. Recently, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84102564103 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79572322952 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2224873272 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6153846154 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296138153945 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981024308118 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864533258193 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219985284907 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111210943647 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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