Essay topics: No one should expect to have privacy in the internet age.
issue
1)rights of individual
2) national secret
3) benefits of information
There have been pros and cons regarding the argument that spending government fund to expand access to the Internet is better than improving public transportation.
While both sides may have their own reasons to support their arguments,
I totally agree with this statement with several reasons and examples as fallows.
To start with, expanding access to the Internet by using government fund is a great way for people to learn important life lesson on the real world.
This is attributed to the fact that getting access to the Internet more often offers opportunities for people to learn new things form it and become growing into adulthood and building a strong character.
Over the decades, today’s rat-race society has been evolving and changing at a surprising with such a hectic lifestyle.
Therefore, people are hard-pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by increasing amount of work.
As a result, we are still mentally immature and have a long way to go before we are grown-up.
However, in this respect, many of people get a lot of life lessons and enrich our sprit by getting access to the Internet more often trough expanded access to the Internet by spending government money.
This is because getting expanded access to the Internet in a way to spend government money allows people to get to move on with the real value that we cannot learn from textbooks, which can be guided by getting access to the Internet more often by spending more government money to expand access to the Internet.
Therefore, we are able to experience something special and it will have a great impact own people’s lives.
Thus, this proves that government should spend more money expanding access to the Internet than improving public transportation.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 53, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith the reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37025316456 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74589284124 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503164556962 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2501819502 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705340431889 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310346032002 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221319342276 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294959614126 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228392471279 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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