People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interest but based on the kinds of jobs they get.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
These days, joblessness has been becoming a major issue not only in the underdeveloped but also in the developed countries of the world. Some people advocate that students should choose subject according to availability of jobs neither their own interest, I completely disagree with this viewpoint due to a coule of reasons, which will be demonstrated in the upcoming paragraphs of the thesis with proper examples.
Considering the points which assert that interest is the main aspect at the time of choosing a job, students should not choose their study according to availability of jobs and money, interest is the fundamental factor, which plays a pivotal role for both employees and employer, if an individual choose job without interest, they need modifications after some month or years but if they choose job by concerning interest, they may be able to work long lasting and may be beneficial for them as well as for company.
In addition to this passion is the trademark of success for every individual in every job, without passion one can not give their full efforts , which is imperative for personal development, and this is a major cause that many people are never satisfied with their job and they also confronts an inbalance in their personal and professional life, which is an alarming issue and increasing dramatically in underdeveloped countries, to illustrate India, japan and so on.So there is crystal clear that choosing an education stream according to job options is jeopardise for personal satisfaction and for self esteem, which was notable factor in the past time.
To conclude it can be said that choosing an education stream by concerning job factors and ignorning own interest is grusesome for an individual, they able to work short time but not long lasting and they work more enthusiastic in their passion jobs. So there is no need to saying that one should not be chosen study according to job availability.
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- People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interest but based on the kinds of jobs they get.To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
These days, joblessness has been becoming a major is...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...le advocate that students should choose subject according to availability of jobs neith...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...s and employer, if an individual choose job without interest, they need modificatio...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... some month or years but if they choose job by concerning interest, they may be abl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sion one can not give their full efforts , which is imperative for personal develo...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'confront'
Suggestion: confront
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Suggestion: jeopardised
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...esteem, which was notable factor in the past time. To conclude it can be said that cho...
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...g job factors and ignorning own interest is grusesome for an individual, they abl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8763062442 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507788161994 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.487738611 49.4020404114 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.0 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259452936727 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134849121988 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746054489091 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177227911229 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398832965487 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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