Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
It is argued by many people that entity names such as movie stars musicians or sports personalities are compensated with overly enormous amount of money. I completely disagree with this opinion as they have achieved unmatched skills in their field and are always under great expectations for the highest performance. However, some other types of jobs should also be paid similar high money.
To begin with, many entertainers consist of special abilities which have come through their repeated supreme performances and hard work. They have unique qualities that distinguish them from anyone else. For example, many sportsmen like NBA star LeBron James have proved themselves being so consistent with their performance that they are paid millions of dollars. Moreover, all countrymen look up to these celebrated performers every time they take the stage. They carry tremendous amount of expectations from people and have no margin of error to let their followers down. For these reasons, I believe that such huge compensation is absolutely justified.
On the other hand, there are some other jobs as well which deserve similar remuneration. Professionals like scientists or astronauts should come at top of the list because of their critical role in nation’s progress. One small mistake can take any country in backward direction by many years. To illustrate, after NASA scientists successfully launched first Mission for humans to land on the moon it revolutionized the way space exploration program is carried out. Therefore, these types of professions should be given equal compensation if not less.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that entertainers are overly compensated as their pay depicts their unique skills and are always performing to satisfy people’s expectations. However, there are some other occupations as well who need to be compensated equally highly as they make tangible impact on nation’s progress and in people’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49174917492 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00570751824 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8622138591 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216320256086 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739746228453 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972760195321 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143765436288 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799535887997 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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