Some people believe that the continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity today.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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Some people believe that the continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity today.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Submitted by Sioon on Wed, 07/24/2019 - 05:19

The global population, which is known as an enormous issue, continues to increase, leading to numerous relevant challenges.

There are numbers of factors contribute to the expanding number, including advances in medical treats and this peaceful world. All of these factors have some similar characteristics, which could cause a growth in birth rate and decline in mortality. This means that the number of newborns rise and the number of deaths decrease. Thus, when the newborn is greater, the population of the world will rise. Additionally, there is a traditional thought in Asia that male is much more important than female. Therefore, many families in China and India would select to born more than two children due to getting a boy, which could also make the population increase.

Although the increase of the number of people is a serious problem, this could not be considered as the greatest problem. It cannot be denied that the demand of natural resources and infrastructures will increase due to the intensive population, which could make a heavy burden on society. Meanwhile, when the demand exceeds the capacity of this planet, it could cause much worse events such as wars. Thus, the increasing population is a massive problem. However it could not occur immediately, which means humans still have time to alleviate this via developing technology and change the thought.

In conclusion, there are many reasons why population continue to rise like environment and individuals' opinion and it is a really serious problem. However, it cannot be seen as the greatest issue because the potential solutions could handle this.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase of the number of people is a serious problem, this could not be considered as...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...easing population is a massive problem. However it could not occur immediately, which m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8112310718 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5132787043 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226226485276 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788631699809 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640656370399 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128264163205 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562392172196 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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