You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
- Describe your new job
- Tell him/her your other news
It’s been so long we last were in touch and had a friendly conversation. I’m writing to you to check how’s everything is going with you and how is your family.
Since our last gathering I didn’t tell you that I moved to a new city and began a new job. After applying for a better opportunity, I had the chance to accept this job offer in Sacramento; because my new girlfriend is leaving there, so I’ll be next to her and we can see each other often.
My new job requests a lot of body work during the day and holding boxes around 10Kg, but that what I was looking for previously a technical job related to what I studied; addition to high salary with good benefits, especially my annual leaves are more than enough 40 day per year. So, I’m excited and comfortable at this job.
However, my girlfriend and I are looking for a house near to our work stations to buy and start furnishing it; since we are planning to get married by next summer and build our family. Hope everything goes to out we are looking for, and of course we are waiting for your visit before our big day.
Give my best regards to everyone there and to your family, I look forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4203539823 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49775919625 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3106234206 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208229884606 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822993085139 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599115877058 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116711082008 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436743044934 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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