You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions on how to send it back to you
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Simon,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed safely in Austria. I would really like to appreciate your thought of get together with friends and family at your place.
I want to thank you from bottom of my heart and it was an memorable celebration, which you held and that too within short span of duration.
When I reached Austria, I realized that I left my wallet at your house. I packed my bags in a hurried way and left as, I was getting late to catch up my flight. It might be near bed side table, as when I was packing my stuff, I thought, I will pack in my rucksack but in flurry way, I forgot to pick it up.
As my wallet contains credit cards and most importantly my company ID. So, It would be great, if you could courier my wallet on priority basis at my official address, as I spend most of the time there.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
Best regards,
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... well. I have landed safely in Austria. I would really like to appreciate your th...
^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... appreciate your thought of get together with friends and family at your place. ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th friends and family at your place. I want to thank you from bottom of my hea...
^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... you from bottom of my heart and it was an memorable celebration, which you held a...
^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hurried way" with adverb for "hurried"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... wallet at your house. I packed my bags in a hurried way and left as, I was getting late to catc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23863636364 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26996991825 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9243711051 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8181818182 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262493112283 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980352303712 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784328696123 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155206436673 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824109988241 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.