Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are importance in achieving happiness?
In people's life happiness is a most important to be live healthy life. Being happy is always affected in our all activities which have done. Lot of factors are depending to make happiness in our life. Both the questions are discussed in the ensuring paragraphs with proper examples.
Person's life span mostly covered by their working part of life, so it is effected to become happy. Job satisfaction is directly connected to the happiness on workplace. If any person work on their interested field, therefore, they work very hard and with full of energies and always smile on their face. They always make that nearest environment happy. In addition to that another circumstances are also view to be happy like family differences, financial problems, wealth and many more. The second and foremost reason is house atmosphere, if in family inner difference happened, in for extent person in all day they thinking about that situation than focus on work.
Happiness can not describe in the one meaning. It has affected by different types of situations. To make smile in poorer people by given to foods, shelter, medical facilities and so on. Furthermore, take dinner with nearones make happy and attachment with each other, share problem with other and solving it. Some time lot of money have but do not have time to spend time with their family make differences between person from their lovely ounces.
To recapitulate discussion, in this century people have to spend time with their family, chose interested field to work, circumstances with the relatives also affect to become happy in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64572709109 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9833302458 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179238621341 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717773927952 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851297049668 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124805828006 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882180482803 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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