The following is from a memo from the advertising director of the Super screen Movie Production Company.
According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public’s lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
Advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company suggests for a greater share in advertising in upcoming budget in order to boost its viewership numbers despite witnessing an increased trend in good reviews.
The director seems to ourightly ignore the dimunitive and subtle factors that play a major role among the audience. Super Screen Movie Production initally produced romantic comedy genre which usually turned out average and mediocre in terms of budget,screenplay and the cast. Critics often hone in for the quality rather than the production area and the content. As a result, reviews during the formaitve years of company, used to be quite acerbic and harsh in tone which way irked the sales and the image of the company. But in contrast, the genre so made was a hit among the public, since people liked the genre and was apt for the trend that exisitng.
As days passed by , the Super Screen realising its poor performane in various departmental aspects of movie making, slowly picked it up to make decent and entertaining movies in the same category of the films. This move by the company was a blunder and the biggest fallacy as the production firm failed to undertand the mood and momentum of the audience. Gone were the days, audience paying heed to the romantic genres. Action thrillers paved their way deeply into the hearts of the people and thus proved to be a sensational form of entertainment. Such a mood was aptly captured by the Your Screen Cinema Production which went on to give several blockbusters even critics constantly applauding them for the fantastic work. Consequently, Super Scrren lost its charm due to its obdurate decions and staid attiude. Though the production quality was improved and critics apparaising for it, audience never made their way in for the screening.
However , such a shortfall of Super Scrren might seem temporary as you never know the mood among the audience. If people get bored and sense a repetitive back to back screenings of the genre are noticed, well audience may turn back their heads towards Super Screen for better movies and improved quality.
Thus, the director seems to be myopic and baseless in his decison. Blinkered focus on advertising itself to boost the viewership number, will be unyielding and subtle factors such as the mood, tolerance and recent trends among the audience must be taken care while taking such key decisions during the annual budget.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 408 350
No. of Characters: 2001 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.494 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.904 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.493 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.338 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , screenplay
... average and mediocre in terms of budget,screenplay and the cast. Critics often hone in for...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...end that exisitng. As days passed by , the Super Screen realising its poor per...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'Your'?
Suggestion: the; Your
...ment. Such a mood was aptly captured by the Your Screen Cinema Production which went on ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eir way in for the screening. However , such a shortfall of Super Scrren might ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 407.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0343980344 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62284859876 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 204.123752495 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550368550369 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6061293415 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.529411765 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216255406341 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633492895547 0.0743258471296 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567676380782 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126540402523 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435556328378 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 98.500998004 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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