The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The provided graph illustrates water waste in American homes. They use in 2 ways without water conservation and with water conservation.
It is immediately obvious that the highest figure is in flushing a toilet and consuming in different methods has big contrast - i.e., twice low. Gallons of water for taking a shower, washing clothes (in a washing machine), using faucets are almost similar (between 10 and 12). Compared to the others, washing dishes (in a dishwasher) has smallest number, with 1 and there is no difference in ways of using. We can see dishwasher machines help us to conserve more water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 466, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the smallest'.
Suggestion: has the smallest
... others, washing dishes in a dishwasher has smallest number, with 1 and there is no differe...
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Line 1, column 486, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes in a dishwasher has smallest number, with 1 and there is no difference in way...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 447.0 937.175257732 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 90.0 206.0 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08007028824 3.78020617076 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8036410849 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 127.690721649 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.733333333333 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 138.6 290.88556701 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9083576011 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113112656178 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690758828138 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779837169762 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113112656178 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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