life today is easier than when our grandparents were childern
Although some people believe that our grandparent's life was healthier and less stressful than today, others see life nowadays is more convenient. From a personal perspective, life today is more comfortable than when my grandparents were children because of easier accessibility to the healthcare system, the revolution in transportation, and technological inventions.
Firstly, when my grandparents were young, the healthcare system was primitive. Not only because of the limited number of hospitals, but also inadequate facilities. One hundred years ago, lots of vaccines and cures did not exist. However, 50-60 years later, scientists have made impressively advanced that would seem fiction to my grandparents. For example, in 1960 saw the development of the first artificial heart and surgeons attempted the first human liver transplantation. Coupled with medical technological advances, easy accessibility to care improves the quality of life. Therefore, life today is better and more advanced.
Next, given that there was no internet 50 years ago, people all over the world could not communicate easily. However, the internet today has made the world a global village. Moreover, the internet opens doors to a wealth of information, that enhances learning outcomes. According to a statistic done by The National Association of Learning in California found that implementing the usage of the internet has maximised the potential learning benefits. Consequently, life today is more productive than my grandparents' experience.
Finally, transportation now is safer and faster than before. We can travel a long distance in a short time; we have fast and comfortable cars. Likewise, public transportation has become more convenient and safer. A survey done by The American Public Transportation Association found that Americans used public transportations are 50% more than before. Therefore, the improvement had happened in transportation brought essential changes to our society.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, life today is more accessible than when my grandparents were children. It is suggested that create more inventions in the future can make our life more enjoyable.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-04 | nph | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-21 | rsheth05 | 60 | view |
| 2023-04-17 | sadasr | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-05 | Dat_Nguyen | 70 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...uture can make our life more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7256097561 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.300735411 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1669902766 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347886773831 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954752325206 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120087521887 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213312508776 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145626093798 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.