write a letter to the manager of the theater of an accident that happened to your friend.
how it happened, how you were helped, what do you want them to do to prevent it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing with respect to the unfortunate event my friend went through in your theater yesterday.
We were so delighted to see a new play at your theater on 13th of August at 9:00 pm that we came one hour before the starting time. As we were strolling about the theater and eating popcorn and finishing them before time, we decided to go and sit on our allotted seats. Therefore, we entered the theater and started ascending the staircase. We could see that there were no railings at the edge of steps, so we were extra cautious about our steps. However, there were minimal light in the hall, so we could not see that there were water all over the floor and in a blink of an eye, my friends slipped her foot and had a severe sprain in her foot, as a consequence a tried to find a chair for her to take rest, but all chairs were fixed to the floor.
First and foremost, I want you to take strict action against cleaning department to check the vicinity on a regular basis to identify and correct any such anomalies. Secondly, you should install a boundary at the edge a stairs, because the older people are prone to lose their balance and can fall over their neck. Thirdly, the extra move-able chairs should be placed in the hall for people who fall sick in a nick of the time and want to take rest a bit.
I hope you will take corrective actions ASAP for the safety of your audience and to prevent any penalties against you.
Yours faithfully,
SAIRA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a stair' or simply 'stairs'?
Suggestion: a stair; stairs
...u should install a boundary at the edge a stairs, because the older people are prone to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ainst you. Yours faithfully, SAIRA
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41454545455 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27946347174 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0836715123 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.363636364 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171461705248 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666869055921 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353420461509 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110799591574 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031243969619 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.