Schools should do more to teach students about their health and well-being. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that health education is one of the most challenging issue in the western world.Some people, however,opine that schools ought to do more to conscientise pupils regarding their healthcare and wellness, approving the idea this essay will elicit on how enhancing health education in scholastic areas benefits both children and society.
To begin with, the first and foremost advantage of health education is the all-round development of a children. Institutes must encourage students towards their health by organising health campaigns and doing more recreational activities related to health,schools should also introduce subject related to health for disseminating proper education of being hale and hearty theoretically which will improve their daily habits as well as inculcate moral values : brushing teeth twice a day, washing hands before and after taking meals and eating green vegetables and fruits.As a result, absenteeism at schools will be reduced and complete attendance helps a student to give his best in academic performances. A survey conducted by Bloomberg Global Health Index in Italy reported the nation as the healthiest country in the world and most of the contribution in notching first rank globally is of the educational institutions.
Another benefit of health education is more and more participation of children in sports. The hygienic bodies of children make them able to take part in sports, which not only improve their physical health but also aid them to compete state and national levels. If the youngsters have knowledge about health benefits and prevention of contagious diseases it could also be shared with family and neighbourhood. Furthermore, when teenagers acquire knowledge about health the adults will also be get indulged in it and their combined efforts lead to the formation of disease free environment in the society.
All in all, imparting effective health education to students by schools in convenient way will uplift the overall performance of a children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48717948718 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00132155562 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.991506925 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.222222222 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261852158206 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100458109243 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664190332447 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1533772744 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456053990612 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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