Write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision of leaving the course and returning to your home country.- Express thanks to the teacher- Explain why you had to leave- Explain what part of course you enjoyed the most.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision of leaving the course and returning to your home country.
- Express thanks to the teacher
- Explain why you had to leave
- Explain what part of course you enjoyed the most.

Dear Miss Maria,

My name is John Mathews, and I am taking IELTS training in your class. First of all, I would like to bid thank you for all your efforts, and dedication with which you make learning process so easy and fun.

Unfortunately, I have to leave the course half-way through. This is because I have a personal emergency. Yesterday, I got a call from my parents, and they told me about the ill-health of my grandfather. I would want to stay close to him as I am the only grandchild who is close to him. Owing to which, it is important for me to travel to my home country as soon as possible.

However, I would like to take the opportunity to mention that the lecture on how to write an essay or a letter effectively was my favourite throughout the curriculum. I could witness the change in my writing skills, as I feel more confident in expressing ideas.

I wish you all the very best for future endeavours. I am surely going to come back and complete my course once the family commitment is sorted.

Thank you for your patience and enthusiasm towards teaching.

Your Sincerely,
John Mathews

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll the very best for future endeavours. I am surely going to come back and comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, thus, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57213930348 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72046970612 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6362291552 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164338216669 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575900362853 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494473545744 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932749553908 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041805089125 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.