You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling
a system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Manager,
I have been a regular visitor at your renowned hotel and always prefer to stay here during my every visit to Chandigarh. The wonderful ambience of the hotel along with the courteous staff has always fascinated me. However, my last visit was a sheer disappointment.
This is to bring your kind attention to the grievances I witnessed. Firstly, the air conditioners of the room were non-functional throughout the day and the recorded temperature of that day was 48 degrees. Moreover, there were no ceiling fans which added more inconvenience to my stay. Secondly, the stinking air was coming out of the conditioners as if no service has been done from quite a long time.
Even after reporting the issue and requesting for the room change, no stringent actions were taken by the staff. It was my one day visit to the city and I had to board a flight in the early morning, therefore, to have a comfortable night I was obliged to change my hotel which cost me quite expensive.
Considering the problems, I request you to take some measures to tackle such kind of issues. Primarily, the hotel employees should be instructed to resolve the issues of visitors on time. Next, the proper maintenance of the infrastructure should be done for its proper functioning, in order to provide a pleasant stay.
Looking forward to immediate actions.
Yours faithfully,
Prabh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-29 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96995708155 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94026814071 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7420478342 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199180623863 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590869161242 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391419903276 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914195175843 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495902095735 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.