Shopping has become new favorite past-time of young generation. Why is this case. should you encourage them to develop other habits.
Teenagers and youngsters do not know the value of time and inclined to waste it in non-productive activities. Recently, there is steep upward trend in passing time while buying stuff that they do not need. This would draw a huge negative impact on their life and our society.
Children have a lot of disposable money, which could prove to the detriment of their career as a whole. Firstly, technology have changed the way shopping has been conducted in history, you can compare prices from number of local and international brands, while sitting in the comport of your sofa and buy the best bet. Thirdly, Teenagers are facing huge competition from their colleagues and friends to look trendy and fashionable. Additionally, this has reduced the hustle of going to big shopping complexes and everything could be delivered at your door-step. Finally, International brands are locally available, therefore high-quality clothes could be bought at competitive prices.
On the other hand, buying latest clothes, shoes, accessories and trendy sunglasses would never have positive impact on someone’s life. Therefore, It is totally waste of someone’s time and ability, which could be spend to do activities, which will have positive in their life. Today than ever, the world is growing full of competition in schools, universities and workplace and only best fit can survive. Therefore, children should invest this time to learn new skills which could include communication skill, practical skill, which can help them tremendously later in their work-life. Additionally, they can form habits which could ultimately strengthens family bond like gardening and helping parents around house. However, world is full of beautiful places and travelling makes you mature and open your perspective, therefore, travelling around country is the best habit in free time. Finally, technology has changed the way of learning and anyone can learn through online courses.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that buying without any reason is totally waste of time and time is money, so it should be spent carefully and, on such tasks, which in turn helps you to achieve your goals and get ahead of the rat race of this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... international brands, while sitting in the comport of your sofa and buy the best bet. Thir...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buying the latest'.
Suggestion: buying the latest
...mpetitive prices. On the other hand, buying latest clothes, shoes, accessories and trendy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29745042493 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83670843573 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4167765671 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118482110717 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352220191953 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366012812319 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767028011723 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239624253292 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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