The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The maps show the current plan of a university’s sports center and the proposed design of the building in the future.
Overall, the center will witness some significant changes. The most striking developments are the conversion of the two outdoor courts and the introduction of more sports facilities.
Looking at the present layout, this sports center has three separate areas which are a large building in the middle and the two outdoor courts to the west and east. Opposite the entrance located a reception, which leads to the seating area on the right and the changing room on the left. There is a gym to the north of the 25-meter pool, which is behind the reception.
Regarding the projected map, the three areas will be merged into one. The outdoor courts in the west of the center are planned to be converted into a leisure pool. Meanwhile, a big sports hall and two dance studios are proposed to be built on the site of the other outdoor courts in the east. There will be two additional changing rooms, a sports shop and a café on either side of the main entrance. The gym is planned to be expanded to the east, while the remaining features are likely to stay unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The maps show the current plan of a university's sports center and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68571428571 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58109294996 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490476190476 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8676088891 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164142638325 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626821232467 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632314136409 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115680900964 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733983873991 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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