The line graph show Internet Users as percentage of population in three nations: The USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009

Essay topics:

The line graph show Internet Users as percentage of population in three nations: The USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009

Highlighted in the graph is the internet users as rate of community in three different country namely: The USA Canada, and mexico between 1999 and 2009.
As can be seen from the chart the proportion of the population who used the internet increased in each country with each passing year. Overall, the percentage of the access to the internet in Canada and the USA is much larger. compare with mexico and Canada experienced the fastest growth in internet usage.
Looking into the details of the graph. In 1999 1999 the proportion of people using the internet in the USA was highest about 20%. With around 10% internet user in Canada, while the figure for mexico was much lower at just 5%. In 2005, the percentage internet users in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70% respectively. However the figure for mexico reached just over 25%.
Meanwhile, In 2009 the rate of internet users in three countries increased fast and highest in Canada almost 100% population using the internet. the figure for the USA about 80% and only 40% of mexico.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oking into the details of the graph. In 1999 1999 the proportion of people using the inte...
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... of people using the internet in the USA was highest about 20%. With around 10% i...
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...ower at just 5%. In 2005, the percentage internet users in both the USA and Canad...
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...Canada rose to around 70% respectively. However the figure for mexico reached just over...
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... Meanwhile, In 2009 the rate of internet users in three countries increased fast ...
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...ost 100% population using the internet. the figure for the USA about 80% and only...
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...ing the internet. the figure for the USA about 80% and only 40% of mexico.
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... internet. the figure for the USA about 80% and only 40% of mexico.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76373626374 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38667177247 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6764616709 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468568885791 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178508573271 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101550552296 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313746797598 0.15604864568 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612345041048 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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