Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is one of the my favourite topics. I will speak about it elaborately. I am discussing both sides objectively. Why completing university is important or vice versa?
Firstly, I want to speak about importance of study in university and significance of university diploma. In our country you can not work without diploma. If you have a university diploma, you will find a job. It can be true somewhat. Because it proofs that you have studied your field on professional level.
Secondly, I want to speak about another opinion. I do not think to study at university is the most important thing. Because it is only paper. It can not prove your ability, it is only your score about university lessons. It is not measure your IQ level, other skills or quickly and smartly thinking ability. I mean that every year hundreds of people admit to university. If you do not study university, it is not show that you will not be a successful. You will be strange, differ from others, but you will live your dream life. You will be free, nobody can force you to do something. Maybe you will not have so much money, but you will work on your favourite job.
At the end, I want to say that if I had a chance, I would not study in university. It is almost waste of time. Unfortunately it is rule of life… However the rules are for breaking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50826446281 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72147204308 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8677467314 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5909090909 106.682146367 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.04545454545 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133523078103 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432851486949 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442463154377 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764449972012 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486310897587 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.69 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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