The bar chart below shows the three main causes of land damage in four different areas in the world
The chart illustrates three principal reasons that caused damage to the land in four continents including africa, asia, australia and europe.
Generally, in most of the continent, breeding is estimated as the largest causes whereas, on the contrary, farming causes the lowest damage comparing with the other factors.
Particularly, in africa, australia and europe, there are 500, slightly over 200 and just over 100 million of hectares of land is destroyed by the act of breeding, but farming activites only account for 300, over 50 and less than 100 million of hectares of land vandalized respectively. africa ,whose nearly 400 million of hectars of land damaged because of the cut down of the trees, is considered to have the most harmed land while that figure in australia and europe are relatively low, around 100 million of hectares.
asia shows a different trend, where tree-cutting damages most of the land (about 450 million of hectares), and breeding causes the lowest destruction to the land (under 400 million of hectares). At the same time, farming takes away a considerable amount of land in asia (nearly 420 million of hectares).
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Suggestion: Africa
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Asia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13368983957 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69689488382 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7180172993 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213831072373 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122462169592 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084689400286 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152892232106 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766645777254 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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