Some people prefer to be in the same kind of job their entire life, but others like to change their jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some employees prefer to stay in the same workplace till they retired, where some advocates in the favour of changing the organization time to time. personally, I opine that diverse professional life is far enriching for one's self-development. However, in this essay I will elaborate the both views with supporting examples.
To begin with, people who are satisfied with their job often tend to stick to the same occupation in hope of increament and promotion. this long term plan primarily developes due to their contentment in current job. But if we dig deeper, would not you assume that the fear of change has acted as the key behind not applying to a new job? In other words, they are comfortable with the former responsibility and recognise their benefit if they keep serving the same organization for more that ten to tweenty years. For instance, promotion to a managerial position in bank is more smooth when you are working in different departments of the bank for many years. job security, pension etc are also known to attract someone to continue one single profession.
On the other hand, some people switch jobs to explore the opportunities available in the job market. Their curious mind often find financial success and faster career growth through this as most of the time they only leave their job when they receive a better offer. For instance, a recent survey from World Street Journal has reported that 72% of the employee who accept a job offer during a contract period, have better career prospect from the new job. In addition to that, people do not only look for higher salary or promotion, it also indicate that human interest for challenge often drags them to change their careerpath. In many biographies, people have referred change of occupation as fullfilling for their adventurous soul.
To recapitulate, holding one job for whole life gives a feeling of security and provides long term financial benefits, while exploring multiple options allow a faster career growth and generate a thrilling experience. My personal recommendation would be the secound one as it pushes you to face new challenges every now and then.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...as it pushes you to face new challenges every now and then.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03899721448 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78575764963 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587743732591 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4905467362 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29712578363 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094234533802 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553551533426 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162238004061 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591667715155 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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