You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have to time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr.Ihab
I am writing to you about the possibility of a fortnight off work to complete my master degree, almost all my thises finished and have to give by 30th July. Unfortunately, all my annual leave has been used up. Any day off would be unpaid, would also check my email every day and be available on emergency phones call as well. I would endeavour to come to office earlier than usual time and work on Saturday to catch up on anything missed. I already spoke with Mr.habashy and Mr.islam about my situation, who are both assume the responsibility for two weeks.
I realise that my temporary absence could be an inconvenience for the company and the rest of them.but the long-term our company will get benefits from my research. as may you know my research on advance Cisco telephony system and already this system has demand in the market and very fewer companies in the market have professional experience. My expertise will help us as competitive.
look forward to hearing from you
Jahanzaib
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ihab
Dear Mr.Ihab I am writing to you about the possib...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aturday to catch up on anything missed. I already spoke with Mr.habashy and Mr.is...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me the responsibility for two weeks. I realise that my temporary absence could...
^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...any will get benefits from my research. as may you know my research on advance Cis...
^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jahanzaib
...ook forward to hearing from you Engr.Jahanzaib
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78651685393 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82880649633 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6738228846 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164449608332 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606933207722 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520773848245 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11544590773 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361925032499 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.