Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on allschool subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on thesubject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all
school subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on the
subject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that adolescents ought to learn all the subjects at school, whereas others believe that they just need to concentrate on the subjects of their interest. I would argue that it would be better for them to learns the subject that they are good at or keen on.
On one side of the argument, some people believe that teenagers are advised to learn various subjects at school because they will be provided the basics of different areas, so in the future they will be able to change to other careers if they wish to. In fact, many adolescents don’t enjoy the variation of the curriculum, so they can easily lose interest in education, and find learning those subjects tedious. Moreover, students will not have enough time to learn all of them properly. Therefore they will be constantly under a lot of pressure.
I would be inclined to argue against this as I believe juveniles should focus on the subjects that they are good at. Many reasons lead me to believe this. Firstly, students, who study subjects they are keen on are usually able to have a good grasp of the subject quickly, in other words, they can pass the test with flying colors. Secondly, studying the subjects that they are major in can help them to accumulate and broaden their knowledge about that area perfectly, as a result, they will be able to chase the top jobs that they want.
In conclusion, although juveniles should learn all subjects at school, I believe that learning favorite subjects is more necessary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng favorite subjects is more necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77011494253 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45595961761 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521072796935 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5083134967 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242648956681 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107141388855 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686340114645 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161629740249 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033565346988 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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