Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries?
environmental risks have become the burning issue all around the world due to a myriads of environmental calamities happening since last few year. some people are of the notion that this threats should be addressed by global authority, whereas some argue that measures taken by individual countries would be more impactful. Personally, I believe that global initiative to protect the earth will bring the success faster to save mother earth and in this essay, I will elaborate the details.
First of all, global initiative assures nesecessry actions for every country as per the need, rather than acess to funding. What I am trying to refer by this is the countries who are below poverty line often struggle to accumulate government funding for environmental projects. Therefor, a number of states where environmental projects are highly essential, may not receive enough funding unless a global authority is managing all the campaigns and distributing the finance depending on the urgency. however, if a global body is responsible to identify the key environmental challenges and take necessary action, then all the problems will be addressed priority basis depending on the level of emergency, despite of economical solvency of the country. For example, environment of Bangladesh is damaged due to waste disposal and government cannot take proper step due to economical crisis the country is facing. however, world Health organization has noticed the issue and have introduced project to remove the landfills.
secondly, when a global threat is taken care through international body, then all the action plans are monitored by world's best scientists and researchers. it ensures best output for the population worldwide. While monitoring the quality of work done by each country is difficult and a complex process, accessing it from a global organization would be easier and much more reliable in terms of quality. For instance, a recent report has shown that environmental campaigns implemented by international organizations are happen to be more transparent and successful, comparing to the national one.
To conclude, global initiatives to protect the greenery is highly recommended to overcome the challenge of financial limitation and available experts in local level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48441926346 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03377610883 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589235127479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5243517539 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180017575403 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549869285773 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543331207957 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09760815205 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461779579597 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.