the culture and traditions are changing from generation to generation. Why does this happen? what can be done to change it?
The culture and traditions are one of the most important identity of a human being in a country. However, this scenario was being changed due to various factors.
Firstly, the tradition and culture of our ancestor was mainly known by our grand parents. People are not showing any interest to learn about their priceless culture because of running behind towards their life. it is very sad to digest a fact that, if any old aged people dies in a family, then the tradition and culture of that particular family would also be buried along with them. in this contemporary lifestyle, people are re-writing the methods of culture based on their convenience, that will never help to study about the habitual roots of our ancient people.
On the other hand, enormous routes are existing ti show development in preserving a tradition.More awareness should be created among adults and mid-aged people about the importance of olden cultures. It would be remarkable, if the schools can introduce cultural and traditional development as a separate subject. Though our grandparents are more expert in their period, people must try to get educated about them. Another key to remember is that, our people should work to safeguard their traditions, so that they can transfer them to their future generations. The best example is, the culture of wearing traditional dresses in south India is still in habit, which was started before 2000 years.
In conclusion, the culture and tradition is the major factor to study about our ancient human being, Due to the development in standards of people and society, it is getting changed from one generation after another, but it can be detered by making the people to acquire the taste of learning about our culture, that can carry the hysteria throughout their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6628166978 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2788796557 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216715075108 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892752246618 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676847084606 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163212183689 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061308225165 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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