During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talk to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your Letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Mr John,
I hope this letter will find you in radiant health. I am writing to you to remind the encounter we had in Delhi airport while boarding Air India flight A50F4 on 2nd August 2019. We had the same colour of laptop bags of VIP brand, where we started interacting with each other.
As we know, you have a restaurant business all across India and you had a plan for expansion in Punjab. Yesterday, I saw your new branch opened in Lawrence Road, Amritsar. Congratulations on achieving one more fate! On having an opportunity, I want to apply for a job in your restaurant for the post of manager.
It is of the utmost importance that I would look for upliftment in the job profile. I have been working as Assistance manager in Brothers restaurant Amritsar, which is known as countries one of the oldest restaurants from last 5 years. Having experience in hand and light-headed personality will help me to handle the chaos professionally.
I hope you will consider my request and opt for a prompt reply.
Yours Sincerely,
John Wick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...r a prompt reply. Yours Sincerely, John Wick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84699453552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2452208077 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8272429506 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13032638955 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633082834694 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449890497006 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710653057449 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329507468985 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.