Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.

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Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.

The speaker presents a view that it is unfortunate that an appealing image seems to overwhelm the importance of the reality or truth behind the image, however, I cannot fully agree with the statement simply because needs of different fields vary from time to time.

Faced with the requirement of making decisions in short time, people are unable to distinguish what is wrong or right, directly depending on the intuition. In this way, appealing image seems to act as a fortunate and essential role for the decision. As you can see in the book-publishing areas, the book named time in time hardly had any literary value but an interesting cover arousing millions of people to buy it when it first came out. The attractive cover might contribute to the great sales of this book. Besides, in the field of politics the great look is likely to be the factor that leads to the winning in an election. there were two candidates competing in the final contention of being the mayor in 2016 in Hefei, China. The more handsome one won the election and took charge of the mayor. In this case, good looking is just like a mascot resulting in the victory of the competition.

it is disturbing to find that there is a prevalent trend that great external is prone to be focused on rather than the inner beauty in a long term. Indeed, Internal features are more vital than the appearance. there is a famous movie named The Sound of Music which depicts the Trapp family story by using different melodious songs. The song named Do Re Mi is the only one that is still prevalent in the whole world, however, the other songs in the movies are not coming down which seem to be a great loss in the field of art. what’s more, the books of harry potter are known to us all. what fascinates people most is the interesting story line about how harry potter grew from a boy to a man. The series of books provide us with the various imagination which make a great resonance in different generations. it’s unfortunate if people abandon this kind of artistic treasure.

All in all, the attitudes towards the certain things may vary differently rest with the length of the time period. So, I partially agree with the opinion that it’s unfortunate in the contemporary society that an appealing image has become more imperative than the reality or truth behind that image.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, in short, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71807228916 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56972333305 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1362123576 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.052631579 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209701803548 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575961702464 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112753335045 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163884288138 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114758526727 0.0667264976115 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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