Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Author claims that no act is done purely for the benefit of others, the reason being all actions are based on self interest even they seem to be done for other people . I completely agree with this statement.
In Today’s fast growing developing word, everyone from educated professionals to businessmen architects ,charity organisations , environmentalist , politicians are busy in filling their own pockets and are not concerned with overall development of the society .
For example : Charity organizations that supports orphanages,old people , or people having blindness or any other critical medical condition are granted lakhs of rupees from government,from private companies and other funding sources , but majority of the funds are distributed among the employees employed in these organizations and very few funds actually reaches to the people who need help and support.
Politicians whose major goal is to help people below the poverty line and increase overall development in the country issues various tax rules and collect large amount of taxes with the people above the poverty line in the name of free education ,health care for poor, country’s overall development .But only few political leaders actually work for the welfare of the society and use people’s money effectively Rest only worry about filling their own treasures.
These example clearly depicts the fact that in today’s world even those people whose major job is to help other people are concerned about their own pockets , their own self interest.
- Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim a 33
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... professionals to businessmen architects ,charity organisations , environmentalist...
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... with overall development of the society . For example : Charity organizations t...
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... old people , or people having blindness or any other critical medical condition ...
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...s with the people above the poverty line in the name of free education ,health ca...
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...erty line in the name of free education ,health care for poor, country's ov...
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...of free education ,health care for poor, country's overall development .But ...
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...le are concerned about their own pockets , their own self interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47280334728 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90330421041 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.230445395 60.3974514979 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 261.6 118.986275619 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8 23.4991977007 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264573478112 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181853973536 0.0831039109588 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219382666063 0.0758088955206 289% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17388301083 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217437264731 0.0667264976115 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.