You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear Mubeen,
I am back home after a great weekend at your home. First of all, thank you so much for your hospitality and I hope you will able to come to my home to stay as well soon.
Unfortunately, I forgot my Coat at your home.do you remember I wore it when we went walking on Saturday night? Its brown color with black collar, two chest pockets, and two long side pockets.
I think left it on a hook behind your main door. Do you remember we hang up our coats together when we got back from walking?
It is very important for me because my wallet which includes my ID and ATM Card and my diary in the left side pocket. My friend passing through your home town this Thursday. And it is near your office. If he could take from there. I have given him your office number. He will call you on Thursday morning. Give me a call if it is not possible.
Anyway thanks again for a great weekend and I hope to see you soon.
Jahanzaib
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s Thursday. And it is near your office. If he could take from there. I have given ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, if, so, well, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17032967033 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16879901512 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0447340173 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.2142857143 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286639362531 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896064243644 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676867397105 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156714162296 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278820301722 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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