Do you agree or disagree with the following topic? It is better to study alone when you are studying your college lessons.
In all social aspects of human beings' lives, people pose questions as to how they should do their tasks, by themselves or others. One of these areas is related to study habits. Studying alone can have many advantages; however, I subscribe to the view that studying with other people is better because of the following reasons.
To begin with, as a human, all people have some areas in which they are not excellent. Hence, people need someone whom they can ask their questions to which they do not know the answers. To elaborate, due to different abilities and capabilities, some people learn better than others in some areas of knowledge. So, if people study with someone else, it will compensate for their incompetence. For instance, as a high school student, I always had problems with mathematics; consequently, my friend helped me in any areas with which I had difficulties. Without my friend's help, I could not be successful in Math. Also, people sometimes unintentionally make mistakes in addressing the problems and consider their mistakes as correct. If there is someone who can give them appropriate feedback, they would, accordingly, be aware of their errors and rectify them. So, studying with someone else, given human imperfections, seems to be logical.
Second, I think, in view of the psychological perspective, studying with someone else improves learning efficiency and effectiveness. Time is so limited, so it is pressing to make the most of your time. When people study with someone else, they can share their assignment; thus, those tasks take less time to accomplish. In this way, people have more time to spend in other areas. For instance, consider students who want to work on a college assignment. If they work alone, it will take a lot of time. As related to my experience, when I was a master’s student at the University of Tehran, professors gave us a lot of articles to translate from English to Persian. Had we done all of those articles alone, they would not have finished in a month. However, just by sharing the article between us, they were so easy to do, and we could save time in this way. Moreover, most of the time, on account of formidable tasks, collage lessons tend to be boring, so students lose their motivation once in a while for studying and have no enthusiasm for doing things. Such enervation, which impair student’s effectiveness, can be avoided by some encouragements from friends. As a result, if people have someone to study with, it can help them not to lose their impetus intermittently and to be more productive.
To sum up, I agree with studying collage's lessons with someone else. Since not only does it make up the people's drawbacks in a specific subject, but it also can be beneficiary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 30.3222958057 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1373.03311258 167% => OK
No of words: 468.0 270.72406181 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89957264957 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89286490536 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 145.348785872 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514957264957 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 419.366225166 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 1.25165562914 879% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 2.5761589404 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0589895608 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1923076923 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178037694909 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568762464133 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654012117725 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138472907668 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489824122385 0.0443174109184 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 63.6247240618 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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