International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Countries that host international sporting events often end up in trouble due to the cost involved. The amount of money pumped in just for a week of this celebration makes the hosting nations to go bankrupt and remain in debt for years thereafter.
International sporting events, like Olympics and Wimbledon, receives a huge number of crowd from all across the world. Only a lavish and big stadiums can be used to conduct these events to accommodate the incoming massive audience, but these venues are not used more than once as a country may get chance only once to host such events, after which these constructions go into disuse. Moreover, it is a pride for the host to showcause themselves by establishing attractive venues, and the humungous cost involved in it becomes an inevitability. The London 2010 Olympic venue left the entire world in shock and surprise with their new built town with multiple stadiums.
This unnatural drive of a country to stand in pride when they host such events dumps them in unrealistic debt. Investing such a huge amount of money, which never returns, in a short duration sporting event is the first and foremost reason for bankruptcy. In addition, the venues after the end of festival will neither be used by local crowd nor for any other big sporting events as mentioned earlier.The same London 2010 olympic town was not used after the show till date, but the money British government spent building that town never came bank and it made british citizens to pay for it.
To conclude, I completely agree that hosting international sporting vents are expensive and it leaves the host country in massive financial crisis. Forgetting the imbalance between the cost and loss it involves and pride it offers remain the root cause for any nation to jump into hosting big sporting events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93831168831 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62720523952 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2453037769 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154975290081 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721532561723 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553865682081 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110271287633 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367144226817 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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