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The article claims that conversion time of work benefits both businesses and employees and provides three reason of support. however, the professor saying that it's ok but sometimes and he refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the author explains that a 4-day workweek will alleviate some considerable expenses. however, the lecture opposes this point by it's true but not always. he claims that how much money may save that's not enough to start new job. For example, a employee if he save 540 dollars in year, it is not enough.
Second, the article avers reducing the number of working days will lower the operating costs. While, the professor reject this point by montion that it's not true. he explains that reducing the number of working days could hurt to buisness. he states that even though this change time working save for fixed expenses, but work efficiency will lower than before.
Third, a 4-day workweek will improve the ability of employee to spend time with their families. however, the professor contends this reason by stating that it's not always true. he claims that children young will have stressful task when begin their school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...s and provides three reason of support. however, the professor saying that its ok but s...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IT_IS[8]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ort. however, the professor saying that its ok but sometimes and he refutes each of...
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Suggestion: However
...l alleviate some considerable expenses. however, the lecture opposes this point by its ...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... opposes this point by its true but not always. he claims that how much money may save...
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Suggestion: He
... this point by its true but not always. he claims that how much money may save tha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... he claims that how much money may save thats not enough to start new job. For exampl...
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Line 2, column 247, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t enough to start new job. For example, a employee if he save 540 dollars in year...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'saves'.
Suggestion: saves
... new job. For example, a employee if he save 540 dollars in year, it is not enough. ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng days will lower the operating costs. While, the professor reject this point by mon...
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Suggestion: He
...his point by montion that its not true. he explains that reducing the number of wo...
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Suggestion: He
...of working days could hurt to buisness. he states that even though this change tim...
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Suggestion: However
...oyee to spend time with their families. however, the professor contends this reason by ...
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Suggestion: He
...on by stating that its not always true. he claims that children young will have st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 192.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02604166667 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27860267816 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.5943778002 49.2860985944 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2307692308 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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