more and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? do you think it is a positive or negative development?
brand name items have the tendency to attract more attention of consumers. There are abundant explanations for this negative development. To begin with, more and more people can afford for famous brands products as economic status has been improving significantly. Therefore, they have a desire to put on exorbitant clothes or drive super cars to show off their wealth as well as their social position. Moreover, modern technology and globalization attributed to the growth in interest in brand-name items. Without an electronic device, people hardly access to products which are only produced and traded overseas except for coming to stores and buy them. Nevertheless, buyers now can stay at home and shop online for items from all over the world. However, the trend to obtain brand-name items brings plenty of adverse impacts on material life. First, buying products from prestige labels is wasting money. In particular, you could pay for hundreds of electricity bills if you didn't spend that amount of money on a pair of Gucci shoes or a handbag from LV. In addition, dreams of owning luxury products of youngsters who still cannot earn their livings by themselves may lead to a burden on their parent's finance. In conclusion, economic growth, globalization and development of technology are main causes for the increase of desire to acquire merchandise from well-known labels. From my viewpoint, this phenomenon will result in money-wasting and family's burden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, except for, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83529215139 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4669610404 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166724400707 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555020129841 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657016223941 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166724400707 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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