The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late night news program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
The past year had seen a shift in the late-night sessions and devoted more time to national news due to the upcoming election season. There had been a short survey conducted where people had demanded to see more news on the National Elections and campaigning status. Though now that elections are over and our leader is elected, the viewers seemed to be more indifferent towards watching the national news. There has also been some murmur about some local issues that have been pushed under the table despite bothering the folks since quite a few months.
The dire need for more importance to weather news has been justified since the locality comes under semi-agricultural land and erratic rainfall patterns have made the farmers very indecisive on planning their crop produce. Almost 23% of the families that reside here depend on agricultural sources of income and have a serious plea to bring back more detailed weather news on our station.
Apart from this, there have been a few sporadic protest marches in the past few months from a few local people. There is ample farmland which has been deemed unfit for farming and has been burned down by an illegal agency causing havoc to the families living near the outskirts of the city. There were two families with stillborn infants and three families with newborns that had certain birth defects. These households blame ingestion of a hydroxyl based chemical gas due to the burning farmland. Due to these pressing issues in the locality, there have been very compelling steps to bring back local news so more people can be aware about these problems that exist in their own neighborhood.
Few of these families have been born and brought up here so they have strong ties with the local businessmen who influence the advertising companies. This has resulted in shutting down of advertising contracts for our television channel as well. These families have a strong appeal to bring these issues into picture and thus the call for covering local news has taken a toll on business.
Thus, considering all these factors, our television station has decided to restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 367 350
No. of Characters: 1786 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.377 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.866 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.398 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.886 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 367.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98365122616 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44161455506 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544959128065 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3442701027 57.8364921388 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.933333333 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 5.70786347227 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173268216491 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670747101797 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711883015551 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109224401948 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565479729632 0.0628817314937 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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