Weather in Vietnam
Today is summer day and Hanoi’s weather is really terrible. It is really hot and the temperature is 38 C degree. All of person really tied in this weather.
Vietnam is tropical country and the Vietnam’s weather is usually warm or hot. But in Vietnam northern we have the cold winter and the weather is not same in all parts of my country.
I think the weather affect the way I feel. In the good weather day I feel so healthy and happy and I am really tired in the terrible day like today. My favorite weather is spring weather and autumn weather because it is cool and I like to coming out to meet my friends. In the summer Hanoi is usually hot city and it make me so tired. In hot days, I often not come out and drink more water. So in summer, I like rainy days more, it is so wet but cool.
I think the weather affect traffic. In terrible weather, everybody usually hurry and do not abide by traffic law. So the traffic is really messy
After all, I really like cool weather.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...summer Hanoi is usually hot city and it make me so tired. In hot days, I often not c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, after all, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30158730159 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31735159562 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6714120275 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0714285714 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417042353391 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158283283464 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14049905026 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248154816882 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141066720371 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 13.0946893788 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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