Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The passage claims that there's a chance of the inoculations killing a person, and thus uses this claim as basis for justifying not administering the inoculations in cow flu prone areas. However, the basic flaw in the argument is that, no substantial evidence has been provided which might prove the initial claim that the inoculations might kill a person.Only after the evidence is provided, we can properly evaluate the argument and arrive at a logical conclusion.
What if evidence is provided which proves that the inoculations can kill people? It will surely strenghten the argument, that the inoculations should not be administered to the people as they might kill someone. Therefore, we will arrive at the conclusion that the inoculations should not be administered to the people.However, if the evidence provided proved that the inoculations are harmless, and no person dies because of them, it will be a clear sign for the authorities that they can safely administer the inoculations.
The initial claim in this case, will be weakened, helping us arrive at the conclusion that the inoculations must be administered to prevent deaths caused by flu.Thus, we can say that, on procuring substantial evidence regarding the initial claim of possible death caused by the inoculations, it will be possible to determine the course of action. The evidence can be of any form: either studies conducted locally or internationally, research papers, surveys. However, the evidence should be credible, to ensure that the decision taken is appropriate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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...istered to prevent deaths caused by flu.Thus, we can say that, on procuring substant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 441.139720559 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27235772358 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16147544059 2.78398813304 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4515428488 57.8364921388 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.125 119.503703932 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 23.324526521 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.70786347227 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25367224599 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122351255794 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662066086488 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25367224599 0.128457276422 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.3799401198 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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