Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
• automobiles
• bicycles
• airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today’s magnificently developed world has made human life more comfortable and luxurious. Also
Current developed world has enormous facility to offer to people of all status. Similarly, it has myriad option available for transportation such as enormous range of cars, auto – scooters, planes, charters and ships. People prefer to use them as per their convenient. Although it is difficult to draw a single choice of transportation out infinite options but seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shorten the distance of one zone of world to another zone.
The discovery of wright brothers” Airplan...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-16 | SarahAlsalihi | 60 | view |
| 2014-02-03 | sheetal makavana | 80 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person’s childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person’s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- The 20th Century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be recommended about the 20th century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. 43
- What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answers 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 80
- People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Uses pecific reasons and examples to explain your answer. 54
seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shorten the distance of one zone of world to another zone.
seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shortened the distance of one zone of world to another zone.
has been proved very beneficial machine of transportation.
has been proved a very beneficial machine of transportation.
whether I and my husband are flying together or not?
whether my husband and I are flying together or not?
various mean of transportation are available,
various means of transportation are available,
choice differ from person to person.
choice differs from person to person.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1984 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.615 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.28 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5