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Further and even more inportantly, saving endangered animal species from exctintion foster the the economy. Some animal species turn out to be beneficial to human beings. Tiger, for example, not only provides us with ngs to us in the long term worth being taken into consideration.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that endangered animal species should be protected from disappear should be warranted.
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Sentence: This fact strongly prove that
Sentence: This fact strongly proves that
Sentence: Further and even more inportantly, saving endangered animal species from exctintion foster the the economy.
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Sentence: Tiger, for example, not only provides us with precise jewerry but also is a vital medicine to us.
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No. of Words: 331 350
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