Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
In the modern world, dangerous sports are becoming more and more trending. It is the well knowing fact that such type of sports can cause a threat to the life and health of athletes. However, this information does not stop amateurs of this pastime. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why extreme sports are so popular and give my viewpoint.
First of all, nowadays man is subject to constant stress however effective ways to reduce it are becoming less and less. At the same time, unforgettable emotions and adrenaline that is generated in extreme situations can help to relieve stress and depression, forcing a person to look at the world around him in a new way.
Secondly, it’s also important that the majority of people are addicted to the opinions of others. In this case, extreme sports are a great way for some of them to get respect and admiration from friends and acquaintances. Moreover, extreme activities are able to develop self-confidence in a person and conviction in his abilities.
Finally, in my opinion, the constant search for new vivid impressions can become an obsession. In other words, a person will not be able to adequately perceive reality without a certain dose of adrenaline, so it is important to do everything in moderation and not rely on dangerous activities as the only way to cheer yourself up or earn respect.
In conclusion, today not only the desire to cope with stress and depression, but also the dream to get adoration from entourage lead people to extreme sports. I personally believe that everything should be in moderation and people should not be too passionate about this pastime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90357142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83480329016 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1661835967 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180934761962 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593314510217 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047276963341 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938620954769 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423648843649 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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