add teeth to our marketing effort we should now switchover to the juvenile Ad agency,which has successfully marketed a leading cola.
Passage concludes or proposes that to add teeth to our marketing effort we should now switchover to the juvenile Ad agency,which has successfully marketed a leading cola.Inorder to support this conclusion author has come up with certain evidences.However on a deeper scrutiny it is revealed that none of the evidences land credible support to the conclusion let us scrutinize them further
Firstly,author said that An analysis of our past performance reveals that we did not fare as well as our competitors because we have stuck to outdated designs author mistakenly assumed that they may also not get fare if they are selling those cars which are not at present in the market.
Secondly,author asserts that however the encouraging news is that many people across the country would be getting driving licenses very soon and we should be able to increase our market share by selling to these people author unfairly generalize that how can the author claim that all the driving license are of only car they can of motorbike,scooter,auto rickshaw from this previous argument how can the author say that they increase their market share by selling to these people.
Thirdly,author convey that to add teeth to our marketing effort we should now switchover to the Juvenile Ad agency,which has successfully marketed a leading cola author didnot gave a thought over that its not neccessary that if one Ad of leading cola gets successful then all adds will get succeed further ,there is no statestical proof or 3-4 previous year data to come on a conclusion.
After having seen the above discussion we come to know that the proposal has not been substantiated by the evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,the author must bring more data into consideration to make such conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1461 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.838 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.54 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 60.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.513 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.551 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.318 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...now switchover to the juvenile Ad agency,which has successfully marketed a leading col...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Inorder
...as successfully marketed a leading cola.Inorder to support this conclusion author has c...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...thor has come up with certain evidences.However on a deeper scrutiny it is revealed tha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , author
...n let us scrutinize them further Firstly,author said that An analysis of our past perfo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , author
...e not at present in the market. Secondly,author asserts that however the encouraging ne...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scooter
...se are of only car they can of motorbike,scooter,auto rickshaw from this previous argume...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , author
...hare by selling to these people. Thirdly,author convey that to add teeth to our marketi...
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Suggestion: , which
...now switchover to the Juvenile Ad agency,which has successfully marketed a leading col...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l then all adds will get succeed further ,there is no statestical proof or 3-4 pre...
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Line 1, column 1548, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ious year data to come on a conclusion. After having seen the above discussion we com...
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Suggestion: Thus
...by the evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,the author must bring more data into co...
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Suggestion: , the
...he evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,the author must bring more data into consid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 291.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07560137457 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15048502771 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 22.8473053892 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.758914782 57.8364921388 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 369.25 119.503703932 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 23.324526521 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 5.70786347227 464% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447928334505 0.218282227539 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.277258750088 0.0743258471296 373% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226763932218 0.0701772020484 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.447928334505 0.128457276422 349% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 14.3799401198 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 48.3550499002 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.197005988 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.32208582834 128% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 12.3882235529 484% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.1389221557 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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