mobile telephone is becoming the most critical piece of technology in our lives
I more or less disagree that we should prevent the mobile telephone from becoming the most critical piece of technology in our lives like every coin has two sides ,mobile phones have their pros and con also. I believe that mobile are essential to talk,do money transactions,theater ticket booking,all the passwords and account detail are saved in it,even if we get stuck at place and don't know the exact address,railway or aeroplane ticket booking,auto booking,we can talk immediately through video call to anywhere in the world these are the people who just use phones judiciously for their important purposes. but every coin has its two sides,people who just use mobile phones relentlessly using social media just for time passing,playing games for long hours can make their body more rigid and stiff.As they do time pass so mobile phone is not neccessary for these people. I conclude by saying mobile phones are critical for those people who genuinely work on it rather than those people just do frivolous stuff not it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 58.6224719101 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 2235.4752809 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01764705882 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8665895486 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.4932671777 140% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 704.065955056 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0693825582 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.25 118.986275619 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 23.4991977007 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215789560032 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156655971411 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189530416876 0.0758088955206 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215789560032 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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